Falling To Pieces Intro

I decided to figure it out so other people could share in its awesomeness.  Im pretty 
it is correct.  Sounds so to me.
You play it with your middle and ring fingers while holding the pick between your thumb 
forefinger.       First Ending.
  x     x     x     x     x   x  |x     x   x x     x     x   x  |
  e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e|e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e|

e|5-5-5-3-3-3-1-1-1-0-0-0-1-1-0-0|-------------------------------|
b|3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3|3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3|
g|-------------------------------|5-5-5-5-5-2-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-5-5|
d|-------------------------------|-------------------------------|
a|-------------------------------|-------------------------------|
E|-------------------------------|-------------------------------|

Second Ending.                            Key + Hints
  x     x   x x     x     x   x  | x=accented note
  e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e| e=eighth note

e|6-6-6-6-6-3-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5| Keep your middle finger on the b-string 3--|
b|3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3---------------------------------------------| on the e-string 3s use your middle finger
g|----------------------------------------------------------------------------| for those as well.  Use the rest of your
d|----------------------------------------------------------------------------| fingers spread out across the rest of the
a|----------------------------------------------------------------------------| fretboard to hit the correct notes.
e|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|


I think its right.  Do you think its right?  Please rate!